Talk:Chapter Outline

there are (perhaps unhelpfully) more detailed notes in the pad on these pages - it seemed easier to go back and forth between them than to and from the discussion. here I'm trying to use the linking capability of the (not sure how well I'm using it...)

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The two disciplines of what? engineering and..? the concept of information?

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From Schizmogenesis to Feedback I think as G. Bateson is introduced already earlier you could (perhaps, unless I am misunderstanding things) introduce the term schizmogenesis there - as here is is a bit confusing to go in as though the reader has read this term already. 'Gregory Bateson was able to reformulate his earlier theory of schismogenesis' if it fits in the introduction of Vibrations just as a term then perhaps its worth dropping in there?

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Lacan Builds a Circuit this is a bit confusing and I'm not sure how to reformat it - the three elements are presented in a way that is both overlapping and... sort of ambiguously repetitive of Lacan (as speaker). I'm going to try and reformulate but I'm not entirely sure what the core differences are, so I am putting a not to RETURN TO THIS AFTER READING THE CHAPTER

also - trying to change lacans three points just emerging to a more active position.

also - "share a lot in common" is, I think, a tautology, so I changed to have a lot in common (COME BACK TO THIS SOL _SHOULD THAT BE PAST TENSE? IN FACT SHOULD THIS WHOLE SECTION BE REGULARISED INTO PAST OR PRESENT TENSE?

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lacan and bateson SOUGHT to do something. it seems that Bateson directly dismisses freud, not sought to, should this be direct?

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Lacan Builds a Circuit this whole chapter heading is a bit convoluted and confusing. RETURN TO THIS AFTER KATE HAS WORKED ON THE LACAN CHAPTER AND WORK IT OUT SOL