Talk:Chapter Outline

there are (perhaps unhelpfully) more detailed notes in the pad on these pages - it seemed easier to go back and forth between them than to and from the discussion. here I'm trying to use the linking capability of the (not sure how well I'm using it...)

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The two disciplines of what? engineering and..? the concept of information?

2) From Schizmogenesis to Feedback I think as G. Bateson is introduced already earlier you could (perhaps, unless I am misunderstanding things) introduce the term schizmogenesis there - as here is is a bit confusing to go in as though the reader has read this term already. 'Gregory Bateson was able to reformulate his earlier theory of schismogenesis' iff it fits in the introduction of Vibrations ,b. just as a term then perhaps its worth dropping in there?