Talk:Introduction: The Foundations of a Cybernetic Discourse

Notes and feedback

Aug 21 SA's comments: I have made a number of minor edits throughout. largely punctuation and things. some rough left over reference numbers. 

 I am not happy with how I have left the end of loop de

"Butler’s materialist conception of the continuity of mind was extended into the twentieth century by the thinkers discussed in The Fabulous Loop de Loop – including Wiener, Korzybski, Craik, McCulloch, and Bateson, through whom we see an increasingly precise articulation of the relation between process and mind."

something in it is not sitting right - in both active address and how the articulation is specified but I will come back to it (I feel like its a bit important as the last sentence to wrap it up in a bow, although, of course, it is leading on to another page (which I suggest - as stated in the pad- should be the chapter introductions).